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The Cause and effect essay is another common essay type, either as an essay type on its own, or as part of a larger essay which includes one or more paragraphs examining causes and effects. This page gives information on what a cause and effect essay is, how to structure this type of essay, and how to use cause and effect structure words (transition signals) for this type of essay. There is also an example cause and effect essay on the topic of women at work, as well as some exercises to help you practice this area.
A cause and effect essay looks at the reasons (or causes) for something, then discusses the results (or effects). For this reason, cause and effect essays are sometimes referred to as reason and result essays. They are one of the most common forms of organisation in academic writing. Sometimes the whole essay will be cause and effect, though sometimes this may be only part of the whole essay. It is also possible, especially for short exam essays, that only the causes or the effects, not both, are discussed. See the examples below.
There are two main ways to structure a cause and effect essay. These are similar to the ways to structure problem-solution essays, namely using a block or a chain structure. For the block structure, all of the causes are listed first, and all of the effects are listed afterwards. For the chain structure, each cause is followed immediately by the effect. Usually that effect will then be the cause of the next effect, which is why this structure is called 'chain'. Both types of structure have their merits. The former is generally clearer, especially for shorter essays, while the latter ensures that any effects you present relate directly to the causes you have given.
The two types of structure, block and chain, are shown in the diagram below.
Block
Introduction
Cause 1 Cause 2 ... Transition sentence/paragraph
Effect 1 Effect 2 ... Conclusion |
Chain
Introduction
Cause 1
& Effect of Cause 1 Cause 2
& Effect of Cause 2 Cause 3
& Effect of Cause 3 ... Conclusion |
Cause and effect structure words are transition signals which show the cause and effect relationships. It is important to be clear which is the cause (or reason) and which is the effect (or result), and to use the correct transition word or phrase. Remember that a cause happens first, and the effect happens later.
Below are some common cause and effect structure words. X is used to indicate a cause, while Y is used to indicate the effect.
Below is a cause and effect essay. This essay uses the block structure. Click on the different areas (in the shaded boxes to the right) to highlight the different structural aspects in this essay, i.e. Causes, Effects, and structure words. This will highlight not simply the paragraphs, but also the thesis statement and summary, as these repeat the causes and effects contained in the main body.
Title: More and more women are now going out to work and some women are now the major salary earner in the family. What are the causes of this, and what effect is this having on families and society?
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Effects |
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Cause transitions |
Effect transitions |
In the past, most women stayed at home to take care of domestic chores such as cooking or cleaning.
Women's liberation and feminism
have meant that this situation has been transformed
and in contemporary society women are playing an almost equal role to men in terms of work.
This
has had significant consequences, both
in terms of the family,
for example by improving quality of life and
increasing children's sense of independence, and
also for society itself with
greater gender equality.
The main reasons behind
the increase of women in the workplace are
women's liberation and feminism.
The women's liberation movement originated in the 1960s and was popularised by authors such as
Simone de Beauvoir.
As a consequence of this, new legislation emerged,
granting women equal rights to men in many fields, in particular employment.
Because of feminist ideas, men have taken up roles which were
previously seen as being for women only, most importantly those related to child rearing.
As a result of this, women have more time to pursue their own careers and interests.
These have led to some significant effects, both to family life and to society as a whole.
Although the earning capacity of a woman in her
lifetime is generally much less than that of a man,
she can nevertheless make a significant contribution to the family income.
The most important
consequence of this is an improved quality of life. By helping to maintain a steady income for
the family, the pressure on the husband is considerably reduced,
hence improving both the husband's
and the wife's emotional wellbeing. Additionally, the purchasing power of the family will also be
raised. This means that
the family can afford more luxuries such as foreign travel and a family car.
A further effect on the family is the promotion of
independence in the children. Some might argue
that having both parents working might be damaging to the children because of a lack of parental
attention. However, such children have to learn to look after themselves at an earlier age, and
their parents often rely on them to help with the housework. This
therefore teaches them important
life skills.
As regards society,
the most significant impact of women
going to work is greater gender equality.
There are an increasing number of women who are becoming politicians, lawyers, and even CEOs and
company managers.
This in turn has led to greater equality for women in all areas of life, not just
employment. For example, women today have much stronger legal rights to protect themselves against domestic
violence and sexual discrimination in the workplace.
In conclusion, the increasing number of women at work
has brought about some important changes to
family life, including improved quality of life and increased independence for children, as well as
affecting society itself. It is clear that the sexes are still a long way from being equal in all
areas of life, however, and perhaps the challenge for the present century is to ensure that this
takes place.
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Effects | ||
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Cause transitions | ||
Effect transitions |
Below is a checklist for cause and effect essays. Use it to check your own writing, or get a peer (another student) to help you.
Item | OK? | Comment |
The essay is a cause and effect essay | ||
An appropriate structure is used, either block or chain | ||
Cause and effect structure words are used accurately | ||
The essay has clear thesis statement | ||
Each paragraph has a clear topic sentence | ||
The essay has strong support (facts, reasons, examples, etc.) | ||
The conclusion includes a summary of the main points |
Find out how to write problem-solution essays in the next section.
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Author: Sheldon Smith ‖ Last modified: 16 January 2022.
Sheldon Smith is the founder and editor of EAPFoundation.com. He has been teaching English for Academic Purposes since 2004. Find out more about him in the about section and connect with him on Twitter, Facebook and LinkedIn.
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